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교정강사 Sarah(C)
등록일 2021-11-02
작성글 2021.11.2
Q. Should the malaria vaccine be mandatory?
A. Yes because it is safe to use and many people died due to malaria virus.
영작숙제
- 체온을 재어 보자. 그래, 너 감기에 걸렸구나.
Let's check body temperature. Oh, you caught a cold.
- 넌 주사를 맞아야겠다.
You have to get an injection.
- 의사선생님, 저 이제 다 나았어요. 엄마, 집에 가요!
Doctor, I recover now. Mom, let's go home!
교정내용

2021.11.2

Q. Should the malaria vaccine be mandatory?

A. Yes because it is safe to use and many people died due to malaria virus.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

A: Yes, because it is safe to use. Also, many people died due to malaria virus. 

영작숙제

- 체온을 재어 보자. 그래, 너 감기에 걸렸구나.

Let's check body temperature. Oh, you caught a cold. => Let me take your temperature. Yes, you have a cold. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

- 넌 주사를 맞아야겠다.

You have to get an injection. =>​ You have to get a shot. 

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

- 의사선생님, 저 이제 다 나았어요. 엄마, 집에 가요!

Doctor, I am recovering now. Mom, let's go home! =>​ Oh, doctor, I'm better now. Mom, let's go home!

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

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