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| 제 목 |
Book Report (The Battle for Crystal Castle) |
| 교정강사 |
Leni(D)
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| 등록일 |
2021-11-03 |
| 작성글 |
Geronimo Stilton Was looking at pop-up book that he made in his house. He thought it was perfect, but suddenly someone called him! And he got inside the pop-up book! Then he was inside the crystal castle, then Blossom, the queen of the whole kingdom of Fantasy appeared, greeting him. She said "the invisible army is trying to attack the crystal Castle.We need two things, one is Mask of He winged ones and other is the crown, and were supposed to find that. Blossom told her daughter Winglet, Winglet's pet Dawn the white tiger and Winglet's protecter, Lorian was coming with her. They went seeing the golden traill. Also, they found a key in the bushes. When they kept on going, they saw a door and the key matched in it they passed the door and on their way, they met Foxlyn, |
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