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제 목 21.04.20
교정강사 Dette(C)
등록일 2021-04-21
작성글 A. What kind if housework do you dislike? Why?
-> I don't like doing everything. Because, I'm tired. I worked to 09:00 - 21:00. So, When i go to home, I'm tired.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(04/20/21)
-나는 그가 다른 여자와 데이트하는 장면을 목격했다.
-> I saw him had date with another girl.

-나는 무릎을 꿇고 용서를 구했다.
-> I ask for forgiveness on my knees.

-자동차 판매량이 5% 이상 줄어 들었다.
-> Car sales volume had down 5% or more.
교정내용

I don't like doing everything. Because, I'm tired. I worked to 09:00 - 21:00. So, When i go to home, I'm tired.  

--> I don't like doing everything because, I'm tired. I work from 09:00 to 21:00. So, When I got home, I'm already tired. 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

​-나는 그가 다른 여자와 데이트하는 장면을 목격했다.

- I saw him had date with another girl. 

 

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

I caught sight of him dating another girl. 

 

-나는 무릎을 꿇고 용서를 구했다.

-I ask for forgiveness on my knees. 

 

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

I fell to my knees and begged forgiveness. 

 

-자동차 판매량이 5% 이상 줄어 들었다.

- Car sales volume had down 5% or more. --> Car sales dropped more than five percent.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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