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제 목 Speak Your Mind 1 21~21 [END] (11/11/2021)
교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-11-11
작성글 A. If you can instantly become an expert in anything, what would that be?

Frankly speaking, I would like to be an expert in English education filed because my final goal is to be an English master.
So, It would be a chance to know how to speak English fluently and effectively like a foreigner and to find out what part of skill in English I lack.

B. Make these sentences into English.(11/11/21)

-전 잡념이 많아요.
I have lots of trivial thoughts

-상대팀 선수들이 우리보다 체격이 두 배로 커서 주눅이 들었어.
The physique of the opposite team's players was twice as big as ours, so I felt intimidated.

-촌스러워 보일 수 있어.
It might look tacky
교정내용

A. If you can instantly become an expert in anything, what would that be?

 

Frankly speaking, I would like to be an expert in English education field because my final goal is to speak fluently in English.

So, it would be a chance to know how to speak English fluently and effectively like a foreigner and to find out what part of skills in English I lack.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

=> Corrected spelling.

 

B. Make these sentences into English. (11/11/21)

 

- 잡념이 많아요.

I have lots of trivial thoughts -> I have a lot of things going on in my mind

 

-상대팀 선수들이 우리보다 체격이 배로 커서 주눅이 들었어.

The physique of the opposite team's players was twice as big as ours, so I felt intimidated.

->The other team was twice our size so we were intimidated.

 

-촌스러워 보일 있어.

It might look tacky. -> It could look tacky.

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them. 

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