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제 목 What event would you organize for Ada Lovelace Day?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-11-15
작성글 A.) What event would you organize for Ada Lovelace Day? Please elaborate your answer.

Ada was Byron's father who left her mother less than one month before she was born,
She did not see him for life. She would always have missed him.
Byron would also be sure to miss his daughter who he left to his ex-wife,
So I would like to organize an event which traces any record revealing their yearning
for each other

B.) Make these sentences into English.
(11/15/21)

-갑자기 헷갈리네.
All at once I get confused.

-완전히 깜빡했어.
I completely slipped my mind.

-내버려 둬.
Let it be.
교정내용

A.) What event would you organize for Ada Lovelace Day? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Ada was Byron's  father who left her mother less than one month before she was born,

She did not see him for life. She would always have missed him. 

Byron would  also  be sure to miss his daughter who he left to his  ex-wife,

So I would like to organize an event which traces any record revealing their yearning 

for each other

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. (Punctuation)

=> Byron was Ada's​ father who left her mother less than one month before she was born.

She did not see him for life. She would always have missed him. 

Byron would  also  be sure to miss his daughter who he left to his  ex-wife.

So, I would like to organize an event which traces any record revealing their yearning for each other​.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/15/21)

 

-갑자기 헷갈리네.

All at once I get confused.  

 

-완전히 깜빡했어.

I completely slipped my mind. 

 

-내버려 둬.

Let it be.

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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