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제 목 7th
교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-11-22
작성글 A. Is it possible to have a healthy life style in modern world?
Due to air pollution and stressful heavy workload, many people are exposed to healthy danger in modern society.
In spite of these some dieases, medical scientists have discovered the solution to them thanks to astonishing medical development.
So, we can improve healthy lives if we take care of ouselves

B. Make these sentences into English.
(11/22/21)
-너무 분위기에 휩쓸리지 말아요.
Don't be carried along by the atmosphere.

-속단하기는 일러.
It's too early to make a hasty conclusion.

-제가 사람을 잘못 봤어요.
I got the wrong person.

교정내용

A. Is it possible to have a healthy life style in modern world?

Due to air pollution and stressful heavy workload, many people are exposed to health hazard in modern society.

In spite of these some diseases, medical scientists have discovered the solution for them, thanks to astonishing medical development. So, we can improve our health if we take care of ourselves


 B. Make these sentences into English.

 (11/22/21)

-너무 분위기에 휩쓸리지 말아요.

Don't be carried along by the atmosphere. -> Don't get carried away.

 

-속단하기는 일러.

 It's too early to make a hasty conclusion.

>     Don't jump to any conclusions.

 

-제가 사람을 잘못 봤어요.

I got the wrong person. -> He's not the person I thought he was.

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them. 

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