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교정강사 Ann(D)
등록일 2021-11-25
작성글 He decided to go on the trip so his friend gave him a big disgusting cookie, a small flute, a book and a bag that can put anything.Geronimo used the book to find five dragons by reading it, he used the flute to gater all the magic sheep, he put stuff in the bag and used the cookie and threw it to the with and defeated the with and saved the princessess. When he went home, Thea brought two icecream for saving thanks about being a guide.
교정내용 You constructed it good but please be mindful of the correct punctuation marks. It must be put correctly. Good job.

 

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