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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-04-22
작성글 I have joined the poetry club on the internet long time ago. I uploaded some poems before and I forgot.
I searched for the website yesterday and I uploaded my poem again. I got the opinions about my poem from 2 members.
When I felt empty, I used to write poems. When I write poems, I have full of inner peace.
Nowadays, I am so into playing table tennis. I totally forget to write poems. When I am free, I sometimes feel empty again.
I want to read and write poems. I have just passed by the moment when I stop and smell flowers in a daily life.
I thank the poem club members for giving me concern about my poem. So I replied.
I hope that playing table tennis and wring poems are well balanced in my life.
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I joined the poetry club on the internet a long time ago. I uploaded some poems before and I forgot. I searched the website yesterday and I uploaded my poem again. I got some comments about my poem from the two members. When I felt empty, I used to write poems. When I write poems, I could have my inner peace. Nowadays, I am into playing table tennis. I totally forget to write poems. When I am free. I sometimes feel empty again. I want to read and write poems. I have just passed by the moment when I stopped and smelled the flowers. I thank the poem club members for giving comments about my poems. So, I replied. I think playing table tennis and writing poems could balance my life.​

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