영작교정

본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

제 목 Summary 2_3
교정강사 Ann(D)
등록일 2021-11-25
작성글 <My thought> I think friendship is kindness. Because in this story, a pixie named Jassy, was small enough to escape from the trap. However, she staged with Geronimo trying to find a way to get out. And Thea brought Geronimo's favoritest icecream for him to thank him about being a guide. I think their're very nice. I will be like them to!
교정내용 You're grammar is great but there are some point that we need to practice well. You're summary gives the full idea of the story. Keep up the good work. Good job!

 

목록