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제 목 Describe yourself.
교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2021-11-25
작성글 A. Describe yourself.
Hello. My name is taegyu. I'm 12 years old. I have straight black hair and black eyes.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(11/25/21)
-치즈 케이크는 얼마나 드릴까요?
How many pieces of cheese cake do you want?
-한 조각만 주세요.
I want one piece of cheese cake.
-그리고 커피 두잔 주세요.
And two cup of coffee, too.
교정내용

A. Describe yourself.

Hello. My name is taegyu. I'm 12 years old. I have straight black hair and black eyes.

Corrected: Hello! My name is Taegyu. I'm 12 years old. I have straight black hair and black eyes.​ ( This is much better. )

 

 B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/25/21)

-치즈 케이크는 얼마나 드릴까요?

How many pieces of cheese cake do you want? 

-한 조각만 주세요.

I want one piece of cheese cake. 

-그리고 커피 두잔 주세요.

And two cup of coffee, too.​ 

Corrected: And two cups of coffee, too.​ ​ The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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