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교정강사 Catherine(C)
등록일 2021-11-29
작성글 BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (2)

A. How are weddings done in your country?

My country has Two ways.
The first way is nothin special with our country.
Brides are wearing a wedding dress, And grooms are wearing suit.

But the second way is Korean traditional wedding.
Brides and grooms are wearing a Hanbok.(Korean traditional clothes)

B. Make these sentences into English.
(11/29/21)
-방문에 주셔서 감사합니다. 다음에 또 오십시오.: Thank you for visit. Please come back next time.
-정말 맛있는 저녁식사 였어요.: It was very delicious dinner.
-당신은 얼만큼의 케이크를 원하세요?: How much cake do you want?

(THANK YOU SO MUCH)
교정내용

A. How are weddings done in your country?

My country has Two ways. ---> My country has two different ways of weddings. 

The first way is nothin special with our country. ---> The first way is not that special.​

 

Brides are wearing a wedding dress, And grooms are wearing suit. ---> Brides are wearing wedding dresses and grooms are wearing suits.​

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

(capitalization)

But the second way is Korean traditional wedding. ---> But the second way is the Korean traditional wedding.​

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

Brides and grooms are wearing a Hanbok.(Korean traditional clothes) 

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/29/21)

-방문에 주셔서 감사합니다. 다음에 또 오십시오.

Thank you for visit. Please come back next time. Corrected pattern=> Thank you for visiting. Please come again.

 

-정말 맛있는 저녁식사 였어요.

It was very delicious dinner. Corrected pattern=>​ It was a nice dinner.

 

-당신은 얼만큼의 케이크를 원하세요?

How much cake do you want? Corrected pattern=>​ How many pieces of cake do you want?

 

You're welcome, Sammy! 

 

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