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제 목 Book Review 1
교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2021-12-01
작성글 It was a very nice Firday for Gerenimo. Suddenly, the phone rang, it was Geronimo's grumpy grandpa. He told him to get ready for the a grand opening! He hed only one week to get ready. Luckly, Geronimo's hard work half paid off! He managed to get ready for the grand opening. He was so~ tired, he fell asleep right away in the bed. Suddenly, Gennimo's friend rainbow dragon was here!
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It was a very nice Friday for Geronimo. Suddenly, the phone rang, it was Geronimo's grumpy grandpa. He told him to get ready for the grand opening! He had only a week to prepare. Luckily, Geronimo's hard work have paid off! He managed to get ready for the grand opening. He was so tired, he fell asleep right away in the bed. Suddenly, Geronimo's friend rainbow dragon arrived! 


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