본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
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| 제 목 |
Book Review 3 |
|---|---|
| 교정강사 | Jaylou(C) |
| 등록일 | 2021-12-01 |
| 작성글 | I thought about peace. And no war, no worries would be great for everyone. I wish there were peace every time. But it isn't...however, I thought we could try to make peace, I thought it could at least be peacetul than ever. I will try to make peace by, trying not to fight with my little sister. |
| 교정내용 |
I thought about peace. And no war, no worries would be great for everyone. I wish there were peace every time. But it isn't...however, I thought we could try to make peace, I thought it could at least be peacetul than ever. I will try to make peace by, trying not to fight with my little sister.
I thought about peace. No war, no worries would be great for everyone. I wish there was peace all the time. But there wasn't...however, I thought we could try to make peace, I thought it could at least be peaceful than ever. I will try to make peace by trying to be friendly with my little sister.
=> Corrected vocabulary. |
| 목록 |
