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제 목 Should all countries be multi-party democracies?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-12-01
작성글 A.) Should all countries be multi-party democracies? Please elaborate your answer.

The more political parties are, the more diverse opinions can be expressed.
It would be idealistic that all countries are multi-party democracies.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/29/21)

-내 가족은 제사를 지내고 있어.
My family performs ancestral rites.

-내가 항상 직설적으로 말하는 거 알잖아.
You know that I am always blunt.

-헛수고 했네.
I went to waste.
교정내용

A.) Should all countries be multi-party democracies? Please elaborate your answer.

 

  The  more political parties are, the more diverse opinions  can be expressed.

  It  would be idealistic  that  all countries  are multi-party democracies.

 

=> The more political parties are, the more diverse opinions can be expressed. It would be ideal that all countries are multi-party democracies.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/29/21)

 

-내 가족은 제사를 지내고 있어.

 My family  performs ancestral rites.  

-내가 항상 직설적으로 말하는 거 알잖아.

You know that  I am always  blunt. 

-헛수고 했네.

I went to waste.

=> What a waste of time.

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. ​

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