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제 목 Should every country have a Tomb of the Unknown Soldier?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-12-11
작성글 A.) Should every country have a Tomb of the Unknown Soldier? Please elaborate your answer.

Unknown soldiers sacrificed themselves for the country, which deserves to be cherished forever.
So building a Tomb of the Unknown Soldier would be one of missions which remaining people must do naturally.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(12/07/21)

-밖에 비가 억수로 오네.
It is raining heavily outdoor.

-나 1년 열두 달 뼈 빠지게 일해.
I work hard all around the year.

-그는 명품이라면 사족을 못 써.
He will abandon all for luxurious items.
교정내용

A.) Should every country have a Tomb of the Unknown Soldier? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Unknown soldiers sacrificed themselves for the country, which deserves to be cherished forever.

So building a Tomb of the Unknown Soldier would be one of missions which remaining people must do naturally. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/07/21)

 

-밖에 비가 억수로 오네.

 It is raining heavily outdoor.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> It's raining cats and dogs outside.​


-나 1년 열두 달 뼈 빠지게 일해.

 I work hard all around the year.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> I work like a dog twelve month of the year.​

 

​-그는 명품이라면 사족을 못 써.​

He will abandon all for luxurious items. 

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> ​He goes nuts over luxury brand.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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