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제 목 Book report 2_1
교정강사 Nor(D)
등록일 2021-12-16
작성글 Gerenimo got a letter, it says to come to Mablehead mountain top. So he went up to the mountain and then he fainted, because he was so~~ tried! Suddenly, he was in Kingdom of fastasy, and he met an elf named, (princess) 'Emerald.' She said she needed help! When Geronimo went to the town, he met Thunderhorn, Geromino 's friend. Thunderhorn was a king of elves. He said, Emerald's and Stering's friend. Sp routness, Blossom's little sister was gone . All they could find, was a medallion of sproutness. So Thunderhorn, stering and Geronimo went to the volcano of fire to rescue sproutness. Inside the volcano, and met diggerts. They said, Sproutness is kidnaped by Sludge. Sludge turn into things that people fear, and he kidnaped Sproutness and stole her power.
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We need to be extra careful in everything that we do. We don't know what might happen next. We should always show our love and care to our love once because we don't know when will be the last time that we'll see them. We must be very careful to whom we give our trust with our personal lives. Definitely, I can only Trust myself and my Family.   

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