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제 목 What color would you like the Eiffel Tower to be and why?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-12-18
작성글 A.) What color would you like the Eiffel Tower to be and why? Please elaborate your answer.

The Eiffel Tower is said to have been repainted 19 times since it was built in 1889.
Its color started reddish brown and then changed to yellow-brown ,brownish-red, and Eiffel Tower Brown.
Among them, the yellow-brown was preferred by Eiffel.
The most appropriate color would be different according to the age.
But I can't say which color be the best because I couldn't tell one from other colors.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(12/17/21)

-그녀는 눈이 너무 높아.
She has so high standards.

-돈벼락 맞는 건 시간 문제라고.
Sudden wealth depends on time.

-그는 돈을 물 쓰듯 해요.
He spends money like water.
교정내용

A.) What color would you like the Eiffel Tower to be and why? Please elaborate your answer.

 

The Eiffel  Tower is said  to have been  repainted  19 times since  it was  built in 1889.

Its color started  reddish brown and then  changed  to  yellow-brown ,brownish-red, and Eiffel Tower Brown.

Among them, the yellow-brown  was preferred by Eiffel.  

The most appropriate color would be  different  according to the age.

But I can't say which color be the best  because I couldn't tell  one from other colors.

 

=> The Eiffel Tower is said  to have been repainted 19 times since it was built in 1889. Its color started reddish brown and then changed to yellow-brown, brownish-red, and Eiffel Tower Brown. Among them, the yellow-brown was preferred by Eiffel.  The most appropriate color would be different  according to the age. But I couldn't say which color  would be the best, because I couldn't tell one from the other colors.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/17/21)

 

-그녀는 눈이 너무 높아.

 She has so high  standards.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> She's too picky.

 

-돈벼락 맞는 건 시간 문제라고.

 Sudden wealth depends on time. 

 

 

-그는 돈을 물 쓰듯 해요.

 He  spends money like water.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> ​He was throwing money around.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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