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교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2021-12-20
작성글 Geronimo was sailing, and he accidenty fell into the ocean. And Suddenly, he was in kingdom of fantasy's ocean! A little fish named puffy said Coraline needed help. And he took Geronimo to coraline. She said scorcher has the royal ruby, and she trying to steal the royal sapphire. Because it will make her stronger! So Geronimo went to Terror castle, and on his way he met blue rider. In the castle, Geronimo sneaked into the mysterious door and found the ruby! There was a beautiful girl in it. Sadly, Geronimo and blue rider was captured and the beautiful girl was almost got eaten by Grizze(monster),( but the good thing was that she was free! )and Geronimo used his sapphire water and turned all the witches into fairies and Scorcher turned into an ash.
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Geronimo was sailing when he accidently fell into the ocean. He suddenly arrived in the kingdom of fantasy's ocean! A little fish named puffy said Coraline needed help. Therefore, he took Geronimo to Coraline. She said scorcher had the royal ruby, and she was trying to steal the royal sapphire because it will make her stronger! So Geronimo went to Terror castle, and on his way he met blue rider. In the castle, Geronimo sneaked into the mysterious door and found the ruby! There was a beautiful girl in it. Sadly, Geronimo and blue rider was captured and the beautiful girl was almost got eaten by Grizze (monster), ( but the good thing was that she was free! ) then Geronimo used his sapphire water and turned all the witches into fairies and Scorcher turned into an ash. 

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