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교정강사 Jane(D)
등록일 2021-12-20
작성글 <The things that I am interested in>
I am interested in playing the piano. I like it because I can play many beautiful songs with piano. It is sometims hard to practice the piano every day, but I will never give up.
My favorite piano song is 'Joe Hisaishi - Summer'. I love melody of the song. I want to play 'summer' someday.

I am happy to share my interest with teacher! Sorry for late submission.
교정내용 I am interested in playing the piano. I like it because I can play many beautiful songs on the piano. Sometimes, it is hard to practice the piano every day, but I will never give up. 

My favorite piano song is 'Joe Hisaishi - Summer'. I love the melody of the song. I want to play 'summer' someday.

 

I am happy to share my interest with you teacher! Sorry for the late submission.

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