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제 목 brief detail of history of korea.
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2021-12-21
작성글 At first, there was the Gojoseon Period, followed by the Three Kingdoms Period, followed by the Goryeo Dynasty, followed by the Joseon Dynasty, and now Korea.
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The first period was the Gojoseon. It was followed by the Three Kingdoms, the Goryeo Dynasty and the Joseon Dynasty. Currently, the Republic of Korea. 

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