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제 목 BOOK REPORT 1_2
교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2021-12-22
작성글 The guardian gave them the 2th charm. Then went to rainbowvalleg and met Gnomes, they gave Geronimo the 3th charm, Medallion of the sun and moon. Geronimo and Chatterelaws went to see Blizzard, the whitc wolf. Geronimo was nice to her, so they became friends and got the Diamond star. Then Geronimo and Chatterelaws got all rest of the charms and also got the golden pearl from Wizard of the black pearl. Then Geronimo went home. I thought about Bilzzard and Geronimo being friends and in the book, Bilzzard actally looked a bit scary, however she was very nice and friendly. Like this, we could not judge someone (anyone) by their appearance. Some could be really good and kind to me and be a great friend even if it looks scary or weird.
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The guardian gave them the 2nd charm. Then, they went to rainbow valley and met Gnomes, they gave Geronimo the 3th charm; Medallion of the sun and moon. Afterwards, Geronimo and Chatter claws went to see Blizzard, the white wolf.  Geronimo was nice to her, so they became friends and got the Diamond star.  Geronimo and Chatter laws got all the rest of the charms and also got the golden pearl from Wizard of the black pearl. Then Geronimo went home. I thought about Blizzard and Geronimo being friends in the book, Blizzard actually looked a bit scary, however she was very nice and friendly. Like this, we could not judge someone (anyone) by their appearance. Some people could be really good, kind and be great friends at the same time even if they look scary or weird. 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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