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제 목 | The Guardian of the Realm 1 |
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교정강사 | Jaylou(C) |
등록일 | 2021-12-23 |
작성글 | Geronimo was training and learning new things with master clever and blue wing. And Suddenly, red mini-dragen told Geranimo, Blossom's baby had been stolen! So Geronimo went to the crystal castle, and met Blossem. Blossom was sick! She said her baby had been stolen and the kingdom is in danger by the Darkshadow. Darkshadow makes everything sad and miserable. So Blossom moved the crystal castle with all her subjects to somewhere else. And Geronimo went to the Blossom's baby, winglet's room. And Geronimo find out Rowbar stoled her and there is a traitor between them! So he went to see Mel. Mel said go to the Fiery Abess and throw the crystle gem in its lava then the darkshadow will vaish. So Geronimo went to the Fierg Abess with his friend and Scribblehopper, Geronimo's best friend. |
교정내용 |
Geronimo was training and learning new things with master clever and blue wing when red mini-dragon told Geronimo, Blossom's baby had been stolen! So Geronimo went to the crystal castle, and met Blossom. Blossom was sick! She said her baby had been stolen and the kingdom is in danger by the Dark shadow. Dark shadow makes everyone sad and miserable. So Blossom moved the crystal castle with all her subjects to somewhere else. Geronimo went to Blossom's baby, winglet's room. He find out Rowbar stole her and there was a traitor between them! So he went to see Mel. Mel said go to the Fiery Abbess and throw the crystal gem in its lava then the dark shadow will vanish. So Geronimo went to the Fiery Abbess with his friend and Scribble hopper, Geronimo's best friend. |
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