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제 목 The Guardian of the Realm 2
교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2021-12-23
작성글 When they almost when to the top of the Fiery Abess, Geronimo had a пар. Suddenly, Scribblehopper said all his friend betrayed him! However Geronimo find out Scribblehopper was Webula! Wither's sevent. But by help with Geronimo's friend, he defeated her and found winglet. I thought love is nice thing. Like, pets will be happy because we love them and we try to take good care of them, and our parents taking care of us. We won't be happy without рerson you love. Like our family.
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When they almost arrived at the top of the Fiery Abbess, Geronimo took a пар. Suddenly, Scribble hopper said all his friend betrayed him! However Geronimo knew Scribble hopper was Webula! Wither's seventh. By the help of Geronimo's friend, he defeated her and found winglet. I think love is a nice thing. Like, pets will be happy because we love them and we try to take good care of them, and our parents care of us. We won't be happy without the рeople we love like our family. 

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