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제 목 The Volcano of Fire 1
교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2021-12-23
작성글 Gerenimo got a letter, it says to come to Mablehead mountain top. So he went up to the mountain and then he fainted, because he was so~~ tried! Suddenly, he was in Kingdom of fastasy, and he met an elf named, (princess) 'Emerald.' She said she needed help! When Geronimo went to the town, he met Thunderhorn, Geromino 's friend. Thunderhorn was a king of elves. He said, Emerald's and Stering's friend. Sproutness, Blossom's little sister was gone . All they could find, was a medallion of sproutness. So Thunderhorn, stering and Geronimo went to the volcano of fire to rescue sproutness. Inside the volcano, and met diggerts. They said, Sproutness is kidnaped by Sludge. Sludge turn into things that people fear, and he kidnaped Sproutness and stole her power.w
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Geronimo got a letter, it says come to Marblehead mountain top. So he went up to the mountain but he fainted because he was so tired. Suddenly, he was in Kingdom of fantasy, and he met an elf named, (princess) 'Emerald.' She said she needed help! When Geronimo went to the town, he met Thunderhorn, Geronimo 's friend. Thunderhorn was a king of elves. He said, Emerald's and Sterling's friend Sproutness, Blossom's little sister was gone. They only found the medallion of sproutness. So Thunderhorn, sterling and Geronimo went to the volcano of fire to rescue sproutness. Inside the volcano they met diggerts. They said sproutness was kidnaped by Sludge. Sludge turned into things that people fear, and he kidnaped Sproutness and stole her power. 

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