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제 목 The wizand's wind 2
교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2021-12-24
작성글 So Geronimo went to the empire of the ruby dragons and found a feater in the fountain that had the crystal sphere, then he went to the kingdom of the serpents for more clues and he found a gray cat hair, so Geronima found out cats in boots stoled it ! Cats in boots works for longbeard the wizand. So be sneaked into the wizard's tower and found 3 magical objects and Blessom. Blossom thanked Gerenimo, and told him the fairy's safe 's code ! Because Blossom trusted Geronimo. Then Geronimo woke up, it was all a dream. He wrote this book. I thought this book is kind of about 'Listen.' Listening is very important, if you doesn't listen, you can get into a big problem. At first, I thought listening isn't very important but this book taught me listening is very important.
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Geronimo went to the empire of the ruby dragons and found a feather in the fountain that had the crystal sphere, then he went to the kingdom of the serpents for more clues and he found a gray cat hair. Geronimo found the cats in the boots stole it !  Cats in boots works for longbeard the wizand. So he sneaked into the wizard's tower and found 3 magical objects and Blossom. Blossom thanked Geronimo, and told him the fairy's safe's code ! Because Blossom trusted Geronimo. Then Geronimo woke up, it was all a dream. He wrote this book. I thought this book is about the word 'Listen.' Listening is very important, if you don't listen, you can have a big problem. At first, I thought listening isn't very important but this book taught me why listening is very important. 

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