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등록일 2021-04-26
작성글 Do you believe human activities contribute to global warming? If so, what should we do about it? If not, what do you think causes global warming?
Yes, I do. We should not throw away garbage and cut trees.
-특별한 거 없어. Not special.
-난 수족관 갈 거거든.같이 갈래? I will go to the aquarium. do you want to go there with?
-물론이지. 나도 정말 가고 싶. Sure. I really want to go there.
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Do you believe human activities contribute to global warming? If so, what should we do about it? If not, what do you think causes global warming?

Yes, I do. We should not throw away garbage and cut trees.-- ★★

Please try to elaborate your answer.

-특별한 거 없어. Not special. -- Nothing special.

-난 수족관 갈 거거든.같이 갈래? I will go to the aquarium. do you want to go there with?--- I'm going to the aquarium. Will you join me?

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

-물론이지. 나도 정말 가고 싶. Sure, I really want to go there.​ 

=> Corrected punctuation.

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