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제 목 Mr. POPPER'S PENGUINS 2
교정강사 Jaylou(C)
등록일 2022-01-06
작성글 And when Mr. Poper wrote a letter to Dr. Smith, about 2 days later, there was a letter from Mr. Smith saying that he might need a mate so he's sending a female pengiem. And Mr. Popper named her Greta, and Captain cook became well with her, they also laid 10 eggs. When the baby penguin hatehed and soon grew, Mr. Popper trained all the penguin and did a show, the show was so good and funny, it became well knowned. Few mouthes later, Admiral Drake came in for a visit, he said he wanted Mr. Popper and the penguins to join him in South Pole and Mr. Popper went their, it was his dream come true!
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Mr. Popper wrote a letter to Dr. Smith, about 2 days later, there was a letter from Mr. Smith saying that he might need a mate so he's sending a female penguin.  And Mr. Popper named her Greta, and Captain cook became well with her, she also laid 10 eggs. When the egg hatched and soon grew as a baby penguin, Mr. Popper trained all the penguin and did a show, the show was so good and funny, it became well known. Few months later, Admiral Drake came in for a visit, he said he wanted Mr. Popper and the penguins to join him in South Pole and Mr. Popper went there, it was a dream come true! 

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