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제 목 My New Year's resolution
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-01-11
작성글 My New Year's resolution is I exercise every day and study 1 hour every day and Don't do too much game,lose 2kg and Don't eat too many fast foods.
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　My New Year's Resolution are:

1. I will exercise everyday.

2. I will study for an hour everyday.
3. I will not play too much games.
4. I will lose 2 kilogram.
And lastly, 5. I won't eat too many fast foods.​ 
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