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제 목 homework Christine(01/06/21)
교정강사 Catherine(C)
등록일 2022-01-13
작성글 A. If he were alive today, what would Buddha think about the modern world?
He would thinks the world is going by bad way.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(01/06/21)
-잘했어요! 또 다른 사람?
-저요. 전갈도 볼 수 있어요.
-네 말이 맞아. 하지만 전갈은 아프리카 사막에 산단다. 그러니까 우리가 여기서 볼 수는 없는.
-Good job! Is there any other person?
-Me! We can see scorpion.
-You are right. But Scorpion lives in America's dessert. So we can't see it here.
교정내용

A. If he were alive today, what would Buddha think about the modern world?

He would thinks the world is going by bad way. ---> He would think the world would be in a bad way/situation.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/06/21)

-잘했어요! 또 다른 사람?

Good job! Is there any other person?​ Corrected pattern=> Good job! What else?

 

-저요. 전갈도 볼 수 있어요.

Me! We can see scorpion.​ Corrected pattern=>​ We can see scorpions, too.

 

-네 말이 맞아. 하지만 전갈은 아프리카 사막에 산단다. 그러니까 우리가 여기서 볼 수는 없는.

You are right. But Scorpion lives in America's dessert. So we can't see it here. Corrected pattern=>​ You're right. But they live in desert of Africa. So we can't see them here.​

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