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제 목 | Today is January 13th, Thursday(But I load it 18th) |
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교정강사 | Happy(C) |
등록일 | 2022-01-18 |
작성글 |
A. Make short diary for the weekend. Title : Go on a Trip My family and I went on a trip. We went to Pohang(it is one of Korea's city) first. I walked on SpaceWalk. Spacewalk's highest height is 60m! I was scared because I have to walk over 60m from land. However, I tried it and I did it. After eat lunch, we went to Ulsan(it is one of Korea's city, too). My parents had already checked-in the hotel, so we could go inside easily. When I entered my room, I was very amazed. There is private spa room! I was excited. We played in spa and ate dinner. But, sadly, we have to check-out because this day was already next day. I want to go there more. B. Make these sentences into English. -노래를 할수 있어요. I can sing. -저기 엄마가 오시는구나. Here comes your mom. -오! 우리 딸. Oh! my daughter. |
교정내용 |
A. Make short diary for the weekend. Title : Go on a Trip My family and I went on a trip. We went to Pohang(it is one of Korea's first city). I walked on SpaceWalk. Spacewalk's highest height is 60m! I was scared because I have to walk over 60m from land. However, I tried it and I did it. After lunch, we went to Ulsan(it is one of Korea's city, too). My parents had already checked-in the hotel, so we could go inside easily. When I entered my room, I was very amazed. There is private spa room! I was excited. We played in the spa and ate dinner. But, sadly, we have to check-out because this day was already next day. I want to go there more. B. Make these sentences into English. -노래를 할수 있어요. I can sing. ✔
-저기 엄마가 오시는구나. Here comes your mom. ✔
-오! 우리 딸. Oh! my daughter. ✔ Well done tae Gyu. Thank you for sharing your trip experience. Have a great day!! |
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