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제 목 | There is a boy in the girls Bathroom 2 |
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교정강사 | Jaylou(C) |
등록일 | 2022-01-21 |
작성글 | So he started by doing his homework, he got some help from his parents but he was very proud of himself. Day after day, he tried to be good. Soon, he's hard had paid of, he became friends with Jeff again, and one girl invited Jeff and Bradley to her birthday party. But when Bradley heard Carla had to leave, he was very sad, he decided to send her a lot of emails. After the birthday party, Bradley wrote Carla a nice email and send her a present with it. I thought about this book and I think it is a bit sad and also it is about 'Secrets'. Secret isn't a good thing to do, it could make people feel bad. So, I thought I should not make any secrets or the could feel bad. I better think about other people's feelings too. |
교정내용 |
So he started by doing his homework, he got some help from his parents but he was very proud of himself. Day after day, he tried to be good. Soon, his hard work had paid off, he became friends with Jeff again, and one girl invited Jeff and Bradley to her birthday party. But when Bradley heard Carla had to leave, he was very sad, he decided to send her a lot of emails. After the birthday party, Bradley wrote Carla a nice email and sent her a present with it. I thought about this book and I think it is a bit sad because it is about 'Secrets'. Secret isn't a good thing to do, it could make people feel bad. So, I thought I should not make any secrets or that could make people feel bad. I better think about other people's feelings too. |
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