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교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-01-23
작성글 A.) Have you ever been on a diet? Was it easy? Was it successful? Please elaborate your answer.

Yes. I have been on a diet for appearance. I ate heatlhy food made with vegeatables. I felt food made with vegetables were easy to digest.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/21/22)

-가방을 보관하셔야 합니다.
You must keep your bag.

-사진 찍으시면 안됩니다.
You must not take photos.

-그녀는 계약서를 우편으로 보낼 거야.
She will send contract to post.
교정내용

A.) Have you ever been on a diet? Was it easy? Was it successful? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Yes. I have been on a diet for appearance. I ate heatlhy food made with vegeatables. I felt  food made with vegetables were easy to digest.

 

=> Yes, I have been on a diet for a better physical appearance. I eat healthy food made from vegetables. I feel that, food made with vegetables is easy to digest.

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/21/22)

 

-가방을 보관하셔야 합니다.

You must keep your bag.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> Your handbag must be put in a locker.

 

-사진 찍으시면 안됩니다.

You must not take photos.

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> ​You are not allowed to take photos.

 

-그녀는 계약서를 우편으로 보낼 거야.

She will send contract to post.

=> She mailed the contract.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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