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제 목 | Charlotte's Web 1 |
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교정강사 | Jaylou(C) |
등록일 | 2022-01-24 |
작성글 | Wilbur was a pig who lived inside a barn. Wilbur was sad every day because he didn't had any friends to play with. But one day, he met a spider named charlotte. Wilbur and Charlotte became best friends and Wilbur was no longer sad. He was glad he had the greatest friend in the whole wide world, Charlotte was very happy too. There were a lot of time beside them, they played hide and seek and Wilbur tried to build a web, but failed. Then one day, the ower of wilbar was planing to eat wilbur! So Charlattle wrote 'some pig' on her web, the next time she wrote 'terrific'. |
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Wilbur was a pig who lived inside a barn. Wilbur was sad every day because he didn't have any friends to play with. But one day, he met a spider named Charlotte. Wilbur and Charlotte became best friends and Wilbur was no longer sad. He was glad he had the greatest friend in the whole world, Charlotte was very happy too. There were a lot of times he was beside them, they played hide and seek and Wilbur tried to build a web, but failed. Then one day, the owner of Wilbar was planning to eat Wilbur! So Charlotte wrote 'some pig' on her web, the next day she wrote 'terrific'. |
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