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제 목 | Charlotte's Web 2 |
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교정강사 | Jaylou(C) |
등록일 | 2022-01-24 |
작성글 | When the owers saw this, they thought their pig, Wilber was a very special pig, and decided not to eat him. The ower of wilbur took wilbur to the competition of best pig and wilbur had won! While that, Charlottle had made a egg -sack with all her eggs in it. Soon after, she died because she was old, Wilbur was sad, but felt a little better by his new friends. Charlottles 3 daughters. I think this book is a lot sad, and it is also about love. Love is a good thing because can be be happy with it, you can't live without love. If parents don't love us, they wouldn't took care of us and we'll die. So love is very important, we should learn love between friend ship. |
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When the owner saw this, they thought their pig, Wilber was a very special pig, and decided not to eat him. The owner of Wilbur took Wilbur to the competition of best pig and Wilbur won! While that, Charlottle had made a egg -sack with all her eggs in it. Soon after, she died because she was old, Wilbur was sad, but felt a little better with his new friends, Charlottles 3 daughters. I think this book is so sad, and it is also about love. Love is a good thing because we can be be happy with it, you can't live without love. If parents don't love us, they wouldn't take care of us and we'll die. So love is very important, we should learn how love between our friend ship. |
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