영작교정

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제 목 steps to assemble a tent.
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-01-25
작성글 Step 1: Place a skin with a combined pole on the floor.
Step 2. Combine all poles.
Step 3. Look carefully at the instructions in a tent.
Step 4. Connect the inner tent to the pole.
Step 5. Hang all the rings.
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Step 1: Place the canopy with a combined pole on the floor.
Step 2: Combine all poles.
Step 3: Look at the instruction carefully.
Step 4: Connect the inner tent to the pole.
Step 5: Hang all the rings.​
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