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등록일 2021-04-28
작성글 BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC(1)

A. What is your dream job? Why?

I want to be a teacher or illustrator.
Because, I like to teach, and draw a painting.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(04/28/21)
-살찔까 봐 걱정돼.: I'm so afraid I'll thick.
-떠날 준비 다 했니.: Did you ready to go?
-네, 엄마.: Yes, mom.

(THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC(1)

 

A. What is your dream job? Why?

 

I want  to be a teacher or illustrator. ---> I want to be a teacher or an illustrator.​

 

Because, I like to teach, and draw a painting. --->​ Because I like to teach, draw and paint.​

 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/28/21)

-살찔까 봐 걱정돼.

I'm so afraid I'll thick. Corrected pattern=> I'm afraid I'll get fat.

-떠날 준비 다 했니.

Did you ready to go? Corrected pattern=>​ Are you ready to leave?

-네, 엄마.

Yes, mom. 

 

(THANK YOU SO MUCH)​ 

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