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교정강사 Catherine(C)
등록일 2022-01-28
작성글 BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (3)

A. Describe the most memorable holiday ever.

The Chuseok is most memorable to me.
Because when I was about 8~9 years old, I visited my grand parent's house,
And I slept there for 2days.
Of course, we ate a lot of kind of delicious foods too.
So I was so fun and happy.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(01/28/22)
-응, 그래서 너무 피곤해.: Yes, So I'm so tired.
-너 거기서뭘 했니?: What did you do at there?
-엄마를 도와드렸어.:I helped my mom.

(THANK YOU SO MUCH)
교정내용

A. Describe the most memorable holiday ever.

The Chuseok is most memorable to me. ----> Chuseok is the most memorable ​holiday ​to me ever.​

 

Because when I was about 8~9 years old, I visited my grand parent's house, ----> Because when I was about 8-9 years old, I visited my grandparent's.​

 

And I slept there for 2days. ----> And I slept there for 2 days.​

 

Of course, we ate a lot of kind of delicious foods too. ----> Of course, we ate a lot of delicious food, too.​

 

So I was so fun and happy. ----> So, I was so happy​ and had so much fun.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/28/22)

-응, 그래서 너무 피곤해.

Yes, So I'm so tired. Corrected pattern=> Yes, I was so tired.

 

-너 거기서뭘 했니?

What did you do at there? Corrected pattern=> What did you do there?

 

-엄마를 도와드렸어.

I helped my mom. 

 

You're welcome, Sammy! ​

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