What is your favorite food? Why? 

 I love every foods chicken, beef, pork, duck, fish, and vegetables etc...✔

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​My granddaughter is graduating. We're on our way to the graduation --> Our granddaughter is graduating. We're going to the graduation ceremony. 

Really? My daughter is graduating too. I'll coming  later soon --> Oh, really? My daughter Yalmi is graduating, too. I'll be there later. 

Here's a map. Go straight and turn right. The school is in front of the Fern bookstore on the corner --> Here's a map. Go straight for one block and turn right. It's in front of the Fun bookstore at the corner. 

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them.

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