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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-04-28
작성글 I am waiting for my husband now. My friend went back to her house about 1 and half hour ago.
We were a little drunk and talked a lot. She is 10 years older than me and she often gives me advices when I am in trouble in life. She esperiences more than me and she can be more flexible to get something. I respect her way of thinking and living.
She thinks that life shoule be happy because life is short. When we die, everything is gone. According to her, I am already late 50. So I should spend more money than save money. When I am healthy, I should do what I want to do. When I get sick, I can't spend money for happiness.
I think she is right. My daughter is senior in university now. That means we will be totally free from her tuition and domitory fee next year. Bye
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I am waiting for my husband now. My friend went back to her house about 1 and a half hour ago.We were a little drunk and talked a lot. She is 10 years older than me and she often gives me advice when I am in trouble. She has a lot of experiences more than me and she can be more flexible to get something. I respect her way of thinking and living. She thinks that life should be happy because life is short. When we die, everything is gone. According to her, I am already in my late 50’s. So, I should spend more money than save money. When I am healthy, I should do what I want to do. When I get sick, I can't spend money for happiness. I think she is right. My daughter is a senior student in the university now. That means we will be totally free from her tuition and dormitory fee next year. Bye

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