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제 목 2/25 homework
교정강사 Dette(C)
등록일 2022-02-27
작성글 A. What kind of family do you want to have in the future?
- I want a family who consider each other and is not poor

B. Make these sentences into English.
(02/25/22)

-난 미끄러운 바닥에서 미끄러졌다. : I slipped on the slippery floor.
-그는 자기 돈 모두를 도박에 썼다. : He spent all his money gambling.
-그들은 군인들을 환영했다. : They welcomed the soldiers.
교정내용


A. What kind of family do you want to have in the future?

- I want a family who consider each other and is not poor 

------> I want to have a considerate and financially stable family. 

(Punctuation)

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

=> Corrected vocabulary.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(02/25/22)

 

-난 미끄러운 바닥에서 미끄러졌다. : I slipped on the slippery floor.  

-그는 자기 돈 모두를 도박에 썼다. : He spent all his money gambling. ----> He spent all his money on gambling.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-그들은 군인들을 환영했다. : They welcomed the soldiers.

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