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제 목 Today's homework(3/2)
교정강사 Enya(C)
등록일 2022-03-02
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. Which hobbies are the most popular with women/men in your country?
The kind of hobbies are more specifier and more diverse than ever. as far as I know the most popular with hobby for everyone is reading.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(03/02/22)
-은행은 고객정보를 공유한다.
The bank shares customer's information.
-내가 그에게 설명할게.
I will explain to him.
-그 회원들은 그 손해들에 대해서 논의했다.
The members discussed about the loss.
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HOMEWORK:

A. Which hobbies are the most popular with women/men in your country?

The kind of hobbies are more specifier and more diverse than ever. as far as I know the most popular with hobby for everyone is reading.

=> Hobbies are more specific and diversified than they have ever been. Reading is, as far as I'm aware, the most popular hobby for everyone.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(03/02/22)

-은행은 고객정보를 공유한다.

The bank shares customer's information. => Banks share customer information.

-내가 그에게 설명할게.

I will explain to him. => Corrected grammatically <=

-그 회원들은 그 손해들에 대해서 논의했다.

The members discussed about the loss. or => The members discussed the losses.​ 

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