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교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-03-04
작성글 A.) What's the best thing that you like about the internet? Please elaborate your answer.

I like the searching function of the internet. I can find many things abount internet

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/02/22)

-은행은 고객정보를 공유한다.
Bank shares the customer information.
-내가 그에게 설명할게.
I will explain for him.
-그 회원들은 그 손해들에 대해서 논의했다.
The members discussed about the loss.
교정내용

A.) What's the best thing that you like about the internet? Please elaborate your answer.

 

I like the searching function of the internet. I can find many things abount internet

 

=> I like the searching function of the internet. I can find many things about the internet.

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/02/22)

 

-은행은 고객정보를 공유한다.

Bank shares the customer information.  

-내가 그에게 설명할게. 

I will explain for him.

=> I will explain to him.

 

-그 회원들은 그 손해들에 대해서 논의했다.

The members discussed about the loss. 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> The members discussed the losses.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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