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제 목 Homework
교정강사 Niah(C)
등록일 2022-03-10
작성글 A. Describe your friends.
My best friend Choi so yun is a member of junior volleyball team. She is very cool and kind. I like her personality.
B. Make these sentences into English.
(03/10/22)

-안녕, 얄미야, 너 어디 가니?
-나 집에 가.
-우리랑 같이 놀자.
-Hi, Yalmi. Where are you going?
-I'm going to home.
-Let's play with us.
교정내용

A. Describe your friends.

My best friend Choi so yun is a member of junior volleyball team. She is very cool and kind. I like her personality. (Correct)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(03/10/22)

 

-안녕, 얄미야, 너 어디 가니?

-나 집에 가.

-우리랑 같이 놀자.

-Hi, Yalmi. Where are you going? (Correct)

 

-I'm going to home. --> I'm going home.

-Let's play with us. --> Why don’t you play with us?

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

 

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