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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-05-03
작성글 I walked up the mountain next to my apartment yesterday. I often go there because it is near my place.
Someone blocked the trail with a iron string and flat pannel. It says that the owner of this mountain doesn't allow us to pass through the trail.
I didn't understand it. Many people had used the trail to reach the top for a long time. The owner maybe blocks the trail because of graves on that side of the mountain?
I am very sorry that but I already know there are many trails in the mountain. I'll use another trail from now on.
That trail is the best way, though. That's because it is connected to the park. I'd be glad that the owner are more generous just like before.
We love this mountain. Bye
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I walked in the mountain next to my apartment yesterday. I often go there because it is near my place.

Someone blocked the trail with an iron string and flat panel. It says that the owner of the mountain doesn't allow us to pass through the trail. I didn't understand it. Many people had used the trail to reach the top for a long time. The owner maybe blocks the trail because of graves on that side of the mountain? I am very sorry that but I already know that there are many trails in the mountain. I'll use another trail from now on. That trail is the best way, though. That's because it is connected to the park. I'd be glad if the owner is more generous just like before. We love this mountain. Bye      

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