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교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-03-30
작성글 A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer.

I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others.
B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/28/22)

-몸 조심하세요.
Take yourself.
-한국에 도착하면 연락주세요.
Please call me when you arrive in korea.
-한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요.
I will call you if I go to korea.
교정내용

A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others.

 

=> I think people's different views cause conflicts. So, I think people have to adjust their thoughts to others.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/28/22)

 

-몸 조심하세요.

Take yourself. 

=> Please take care.


-한국에 도착하면 연락주세요.

Please call me when you arrive in korea.

=> Please call me when you arrive in Korea.​  { Please be aware that a country's name's first letter should be capitalized. For example; South Korea and Philippines }

 

 

-한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요.

I will call you if I go to korea.

=> ​I'll call if I ever go to Korea. { Capitalization }


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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