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교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
등록일 | 2022-03-30 |
작성글 |
A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer. I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/28/22) -몸 조심하세요. Take yourself. -한국에 도착하면 연락주세요. Please call me when you arrive in korea. -한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요. I will call you if I go to korea. |
교정내용 |
A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer.
I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others.
=> I think people's different views cause conflicts. So, I think people have to adjust their thoughts to others.
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(03/28/22)
-몸 조심하세요. Take yourself. => Please take care. -한국에 도착하면 연락주세요. Please call me when you arrive in korea. => Please call me when you arrive in Korea. { Please be aware that a country's name's first letter should be capitalized. For example; South Korea and Philippines }
-한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요. I will call you if I go to korea. => I'll call if I ever go to Korea. { Capitalization } • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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