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제 목 Should Germany spend more money on defense?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-04-08
작성글 A.) Should Germany spend more money on defense? Please elaborate on your answer.

The USA claims that its allied countries should pay more on defense, which might be its strategy to save its own cost.
I fear that each country's increase of the expenditure on defense could result in the increase of war risks.
So Germany must be careful in deciding the defense expenditure.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/06/22)

-여기 아주 아늑한데.
It is very cozy here.

-어디서 차를 빌릴 수 있죠?
Where can I rent a vehicle?

-도시가 내려다보이는 방으로 주세요.
I want a room overlooking the downtown.
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A.) Should Germany spend more money on defense? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The USA claims that  its allied countries should pay more on defense, which might be its strategy to save its own cost.

I fear that each country's increase of the expenditure on defense could result in the increase of war risks.

So Germany must be careful in deciding the defense expenditure. 

 

=> The USA claims that its allied countries should pay more on defense, which might be its strategy to save its own cost.

I fear that each country's increase in the expenditure on defense could result in an increase in war risks.

So, Germany must be careful in deciding the defense expenditure. ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/06/22)

 

-여기 아주 아늑한데.

 It is very cozy here.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> This place is very cozy.

 

-어디서 차를 빌릴 수 있죠?

 Where can I rent a vehicle? 

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> Where can I rent a car?


-도시가 내려다보이는 방으로 주세요.

 I want a room overlooking the downtown. 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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