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제 목 Should governments build more museums?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-05-05
작성글 A.) Should governments build more museums?

A museum is where people share culture and history with each other.
So governments must try to increase the number of museum.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/26/21)

-저희 고객 서비스팀은 매달 주기적인 검사를 실시합니다.
Our service team makes a periodical check every month.

-서비스 팀은 빠르고 효율적으로 긴급상황에서 대응할 수 있습니다.
Service team can respond to emergency fast and efficiently.

-전화 한통이면 한 시간 내로 현장에 도착합니다.
Make a phone call and we will be in scene within an hour.
교정내용

A.) Should governments build more museums?

 

A museum is where people share culture and history with each other. 

So governments must try to increase the number of museum.

=> So, governments must try to increase the number of museum.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/26/21)

 

-저희 고객 서비스팀은 매달 주기적인 검사를 실시합니다.

Our service team makes a periodical check every month. 

OR

=> Our customer service team makes routine inspections every month.

 

-서비스 팀은 빠르고 효율적으로 긴급상황에서 대응할 수 있습니다.

Service team can respond to emergency fast and efficiently.

=> The team can quickly and efficiently react to emergency situations.

 

-전화 한통이면 한 시간 내로 현장에 도착합니다.

Make a phone call and we will be in scene within an hour.​ 

OR

=> Just one call and within an hour, they arrive on the scene.

Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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