A. When is the perfect time to get away from a busy life?

- I think it's time for efficiency to not improve even if you keep working.

----------> I think the perfect time to get away from a busy life is when your efficiency at work is not improving anymore.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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B. Make these sentences into English.

-몇 시 입니까? : What time is it? ✔

------> Do you have the time?

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

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-몇 시 인지 아십니까? : Do you know what time it is? ✔

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-손목시계 차고 있는 사람 있나요? : Does anyone have a watch on? ✔

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