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In a high-tech world, will pencils still be needed? |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2021-05-05 |
| 작성글 |
A.) In a high-tech world, will pencils still be needed? Please elaborate your answers. Sentiment from writing in a pencil could not be replaced by computer. So I think that pencils will still be needed even in a high-tech world. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/03/21) -귀사의 상품에 대한 반응이 좋으면 주문을 늘리도록 하겠습니다. If your products get good response, we will increase the order. -시장이 호의적으로 변하면 더 주문하겠습니다. If the market changes favorably, we will make more order. -정기적인 주문을 점차적으로 늘릴 계획입니다. We have a plan to increase periodical order gradually. |
| 교정내용 |
A.) In a high-tech world, will pencils still be needed? Please elaborate your answers.
Sentiment from writing in a pencil could not be replaced by computer. => Sentiment from writing with a pencil could not be replaced by a computer.
So I think that pencils will still be needed even in a high-tech world. √
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(05/03/21)
-귀사의 상품에 대한 반응이 좋으면 주문을 늘리도록 하겠습니다. If your products get good response, we will increase the order. √ OR => We will increase our order if your products are well-received.
-시장이 호의적으로 변하면 더 주문하겠습니다. If the market changes favorably, we will make more order.√
OR => We will order more if the market becomes favorable. -정기적인 주문을 점차적으로 늘릴 계획입니다. We have a plan to increase periodical order gradually. √ OR => We plan to gradually increase regular orders. • Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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